We have lost so many loved family and friends during the last six months that I dedicate this ode to their memories. Through our tears, thoughts and prayers, we know they are now in a better, much happier place. Their suffering is over.
The Appointed Hour
Quietly stepping on silk slippers
without advance warning
save the Doctor’s pronouncement
and a frightening prognosis,
the hour finally slipped in without
loud knocks on the door. Softly,
it entered through wall cracks,
unnoticed by all save the
person ravaged with advance
stages of the disease. There were
no further life-saving procedures.
Until now, brave measures had
prolonged life. Faced with the
inevitable, without fanfare and
swiftly now, the appointed
hour had arrived. Tenderly,
the loved ones touched
the ill one lying unmoving
and breathing shallowly.
Angels softly and silently
removed the suffering which had
of late magnified. With comforting
touches, the angels whispered
that the appointed hour had come.
Liebe Mary Ann,ich bewundere deine Gabe Gefühle und Empfindungen Deinen Lesern mit ausgesuchten Worten und Formulierungen zu übermitteln.Meine Hochachtung vor deinem Talent.
Ich liebe deine schriftstellerischen Darstellungen zu lesen! Alles Liebe ,Dein Arno
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Thanks for your kind words and comments about my creative writing talent. I enjoy writing and playing with words so very much. Your perceptions tell me I have been successful in conveying my thoughts and feelings into words. Enjoy your weekend!
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Quite a poem! Beautiful in its sad and delicate lines. I found myself emphasizing the first word of each line as I read.
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Thanks for your insightful comments about my poetry. There is beauty all around us in people, nature and in events. Your descriptions are truly lovely. Enjoy your weekend.
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Beautiful! Enjoy your Valentine’s Day as well.
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I am so sorry for the loss of your close ones, Mary Ann. My thoughts are with you at this difficult time. Your poem is beautiful, quiet serenity and full of peace. Hugs to you ❤️
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Thank you so much. Hugs are always appreciated.
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I wanted to tell the story behind the clock photo in the post. My tech ed colleague and friend, Joe, made it and gave it to me when he retired. I just loved the appearance. It was then he explained that barbers use such clocks in their shops so they can simply look in the mirror to see the time instead of having to turn around and look at the clock. I have noticed that when I replace the batteries, I view the clock in the mirror to set the correct time. It is quite the conversation piece!
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What a wonderful story about this most unusual clock. I thought it was an image from the internet and didn’t realise it was your own clock. I’m not surprised you have to check the time in the mirror – my brain has to do mental gymnastics to work it out otherwise.
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That clock hangs on the kitchen wall. When visitors come in and notice the time, a conversation usually starts. The creator and tech education teacher is a great friend with wonderful ideas. I don’t think I know the time when I check. True, mental gymnastics required. Enjoy your week ahead.
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That’s was a very touching poem about a life ending quietly and with dignity. I’m afraid I’ve also lost a some very dear family members over the last few years, so I read your words with bittersweet emotions.
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Why thank you for your thoughtful comment. The emotions are indeed bittersweet of late. I believe my faith sustains me through these rough patches when we lose our dear ones. I am sorry to hear of your dear departed family members. It is never easy for those left behind. Thoughts and prayers.
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A beautiful post. I am sorry for your loss.
The story of the barbers clock is very interesting.
All my best to you during this sad time.
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Thank you for such kind words. I enjoy the mental activity of trying to figure out the time with that clock. Short of taking it down to look in the mirror, I have been unsuccessful thus far. It’s mental entertainment though.
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I am so sorry for your loss. Thank you for sharing these heartfelt words with us.
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I appreciate your comment very much. Thanks.
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A lovely poem, both sad and peaceful. I’m sorry for all the recent losses. Your words are beautiful.
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I appreciate your comment very much. The words are spoken from my heart. When I sing at funerals, I sing with passion and hope those who have gone before us can hear us in heaven. I am a woman of faith. Thank you.
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